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F.1 Revision Directive from G.2

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F.1 Revision Directive from G.2

Required terminology insert

Add a section titled:

## Terminology boundaries

It should distinguish:

  • Paul Taylor's teleological centers of life;
  • Parsons's telic system;
  • reversal theory's telic and paratelic states;
  • linguistic telicity;
  • computational telic states and telic controllability;
  • polytely;
  • the proposed telic field and polytelometry.

Required replacements

Replace technical uses of:

simplified telic field calculation

with:

telic projection estimation

Retain one lineage note documenting the original wording.

Replace technical uses of:

teleological integrity

with:

telic integrity

Required new sources

Add:

  • Amir, Niv, and Langdon, 2023;
  • Amir, Tiomkin, and Langdon, 2024;
  • Amir, Tiomkin, and Langdon, 2025;
  • Taylor, 1986;
  • Parsons, 1978;
  • Murgatroyd et al., 1978;
  • Apter, 2007;
  • Funke, 2001;
  • future-self continuity sources;
  • Oposa v. Factoran.

Required narrowing

Change universal formulations of:

Semantics is compressed orientation.

to:

In consequential coordination, semantics often carries compressed orientation among centers and downstream processes.

The shorter formulation may remain as a candidate aphorism, not an established universal.

Required additions

Add:

  • paratelic and atelic value;
  • explicit distinction between standing and biological autonomy;
  • context capacity as a profile;
  • future-self and intergenerational neighbors;
  • semantic-polytelometry minimum architecture;
  • a novelty statement describing the paper as a new composition of established problem families.

Publication block

F.1 should not be published as stable until these revisions are made and reviewed.