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F.1 Revision Directive from G.2
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F.1 Revision Directive from G.2
Required terminology insert
Add a section titled:
## Terminology boundaries
It should distinguish:
- Paul Taylor's teleological centers of life;
- Parsons's telic system;
- reversal theory's telic and paratelic states;
- linguistic telicity;
- computational telic states and telic controllability;
- polytely;
- the proposed telic field and polytelometry.
Required replacements
Replace technical uses of:
simplified telic field calculation
with:
telic projection estimation
Retain one lineage note documenting the original wording.
Replace technical uses of:
teleological integrity
with:
telic integrity
Required new sources
Add:
- Amir, Niv, and Langdon, 2023;
- Amir, Tiomkin, and Langdon, 2024;
- Amir, Tiomkin, and Langdon, 2025;
- Taylor, 1986;
- Parsons, 1978;
- Murgatroyd et al., 1978;
- Apter, 2007;
- Funke, 2001;
- future-self continuity sources;
- Oposa v. Factoran.
Required narrowing
Change universal formulations of:
Semantics is compressed orientation.
to:
In consequential coordination, semantics often carries compressed orientation among centers and downstream processes.
The shorter formulation may remain as a candidate aphorism, not an established universal.
Required additions
Add:
- paratelic and atelic value;
- explicit distinction between standing and biological autonomy;
- context capacity as a profile;
- future-self and intergenerational neighbors;
- semantic-polytelometry minimum architecture;
- a novelty statement describing the paper as a new composition of established problem families.
Publication block
F.1 should not be published as stable until these revisions are made and reviewed.